I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello, today ill share the slide that I made and the work on it, we made a slide about the great pacific garbage patch, for the people who don't know what is the great garbage patch, it's garbage on the ocean the largest amount of garbage on 1 area.
Hi Matt your slide is a little to big I like the way you added a lot of facts and research. What do you think you could do to to make your work better from Keghan
Hi Matt your slide is a little to big I like the way you added a lot of facts and research. What do you think you could do to to make your work better from Keghan
Hello Matt, I have really enjoyed reading your blogpost about The Great Pacific Garbage Patch. I also liked how you explained what it is, as well as five different facts about The Great Pacific Garbage Patch. However, I would just tidy up your presentation as it extends out of the page and check your grammar. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Hi Matt your slide is a little to big I like
ReplyDeletethe way you added a lot of facts and research.
What do you think you could do to to make your
work better from Keghan
Hi Matt your slide is a little to big I like
ReplyDeletethe way you added a lot of facts and research.
What do you think you could do to to make your
work better from Keghan
Hello Matt, I have really enjoyed reading your blogpost about The Great Pacific Garbage Patch. I also liked how you explained what it is, as well as five different facts about The Great Pacific Garbage Patch. However, I would just tidy up your presentation as it extends out of the page and check your grammar. Anyway, keep up the good work!
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