Hello, today ill share a passion of mine that can help me find a job. Sport's I like sport and I think if I keep doing it, it will improve my physical strength I could use those when I become a soldier, I think I want to be a soldier because I like guns and I want to learn how to use guns.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, March 29, 2021
Wednesday, March 24, 2021
English work
Hello, today I'm going to share a work that I have done in English,
Show don't tell
What do you think “show don’t tell” means?
How can we re-write these sentences to “show” and not “tell”?
The buildings were tall.
Sarah was really upset.
She was so happy to see him.
The lake was beautiful.
Try this on your own now, and post it to your blog.
The Buildings were tall - City it's where does hight structure can be found these structures are used for a lot of stuff, used for work, selling, book's, hotel and more, beautiful structures that help us a lot.
Sarah was really upset - a girl crying, tear's coming out of her eye's because one other girl is mean to her.
She was happy to see him - A girl hasn't seen a friend of his in year's but yesterday they meet, the girl was full of joy.
The lake was beautiful - There a park this park has water and many people go there to fish swim and just relax.
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BURNING HOUSE
Burning house - One day there's a man named Kevin he's a busy man. he lives alone to the wood he works a lot of jobs he drives school buses, some time's he's a casher and sometime's stole stuff to survive, he stone on store's, he disguises themselves as a customer and get what he needs and run as fast as he can. Keven uses candle but it's dangerous sometime's because he lives in a wooden house and one day he goes to the city and try to steal stuff that he needed but he remembers something he looked at the woods on the place where his house got to build there's a fire the thing that he remembers is the candle. he tries to go back as fast as he can but he didn't get there in time when he got back he only sees the red stuff destroying his house.
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Girl in a bridge
There's a woman named Samantha, she's is a beautiful woman, she lives alone, many people admire and like her, one day, she was walking to a mall to buy some food for his fridge then a man walks and bumped into her, a man apologizes so Samantha carries on. The next day Samantha decided to go to the park and when Samantha look around he saw a man, and when she looks at him, she knows that she recognizes the man and suddenly she remembers that is the man that she bumped into she said that's weird maybe it's just a coincidence and like 10 minute's ago Samantha wanted to walk on the bridge's and sit for a minute she looks at the surrounding of her saw a man passing by a look at it and it's the guy from the park suddenly something and like talking to her but no one is near her when she taps the guy and looks at it face the guy have no face and suddenly heard a screaming sound of women this women didn't have a face too but she had a mouth she says wake up. the voice, it's getting louder than louder and suddenly so dark there's a light the sound is coming from the light so I tried to follow it suddenly my eye open a big and I saw a man trying to help me because I collapse.
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Two kids
One's upon a time a man name Russel lives in a shack in the wood. he chops wood's and sells it for money but he cares about our planet too so if he cut a big one he would plant 3 to 5 one's, but that's not the mysterious thing on this guy. the mysterious one is he dreams about two girl/kids this dream isn't just a normal dream because he would dream it most of the time a kid running on the wild they were shouting, Help Help somebody Help us and sometime's when that happened and he tries to help them something bad happened to him like getting attack by wolf's or sometimes get trapped by some traped that the other hunter has put for the animal's but one time he didn't get trap and could have helped them but someone was hunting them he can't see the face because the guy that was hunting the two kid has a mask. he tries to save them but he keeps dying but one day he used his mind and said it's my dream! I can do the thing that they can't do he thinks that there's police and the police appeared in front of him, that how he saves a two kid in his dream though.
Tuesday, March 23, 2021
Music of 1960's The beatle's
Thursday, March 18, 2021
Anzac
Hello guys, today im going to share the Anzac, the stuff that happened there and more. I'll answer some question that would show what happened.
what is Anzac? it's an army.
what does A.n.z.a.c stand for? Australia New Zealand army core.
where did they fight? it's in Turkish
who attack first? the Anzac, British, german and french.
why did they attack the Turkish? The British, Anzac, French and German think Their objective was to wrest control of the Dardanelles and re-establish sea communications with Russia through the Black Sea and end the Ottoman Empire's role in the war. I'll put a link here it's a show map I tried to make my own one but it's bad so yea forgive me for that - Link
Friday, March 5, 2021
hello, today ill share a work that we have done in ESOL. our teacher has read a book to us. and she gave us some question to answer after that we are supposed to tell something about Athletics. on athletics, on the last of athletics, I watched it and it's fun for me because I think my Kahuwi win.
THE WISH (Anton Vogt)
Answer the following questions in full sentences. Give a quote from the actual story to support your answers.
IDEAS
What was the boy’s wish? He wishes that the man that made him lie would die
Was the boy’s father strict or lenient? How do you know? I'm pretty sure he’s strict but a kind one he’s son doesn't want to lie but I think because of that strict he wanted the guy to die because he made him lie.
How did the boy usually spend his summer? Getting some milk and selling it.
What was the weekend chore he hated most? Sunday because he would need to clean the church and ready the stuff that they are gonna use.
Why was the boy upset with the old man? Because the old man makes him lie, all of the milk got sold but he feels sad because he forgot to sell one to the old man but only the left out is the one that was not new. So he doesn't know if it’s expired or not. The old man came there and bought milk but he asked if this was the new one’s he said yes.
What did he think he needed to forgive the old man for? For making him lie
CONTENT
What is a milk round? Not sure
What is a ‘billy’? (see if you can find a picture and insert it.) in modern days, billy is used to store milk.
What is the “Day of Rest”? Why did the boy think that using the hall in many ways made a joke of this day? Not sure on this one
What is a “post mortem”? It’s when someone is examining a dead body.
What does “rapt attention” mean? Giving complete attention to other people or something.
Find dictionary definitions for: pious; flop; compelling; gramophone; desire
Pious - devoutly religious is like how religious you are, how deep is your religious feeling.
Flop - fall or hang
Compelling - tending to compel, as to force or push toward a course of action.
Gramophone - I think it’s an old phone that was used to call someone.
Desire - desire is like when you really want something that you would do almost everything to get it.