English work

Hello, today I'm going to share a work that I have done in English,

Show don't tell

What do you think “show don’t tell” means?

How can we re-write these sentences to “show” and not “tell”?

The buildings were tall.

Sarah was really upset.

She was so happy to see him.

The lake was beautiful.

Try this on your own now, and post it to your blog.

The Buildings were tall - City it's where does hight structure can be found these structures are used for a lot of stuff, used for work, selling, book's, hotel and more, beautiful structures that help us a lot.

Sarah was really upset - a girl crying, tear's coming out of her eye's because one other girl is mean to her.

She was happy to see him - A girl hasn't seen a friend of his in year's but yesterday they meet, the girl was full of joy.

The lake was beautiful - There a park this park has water and many people go there to fish swim and just relax.

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BURNING HOUSE

Burning house - One day there's a man named Kevin he's a busy man. he lives alone to the wood he works a lot of jobs he drives school buses, some time's he's a casher and sometime's stole stuff to survive, he stone on store's, he disguises themselves as a customer and get what he needs and run as fast as he can. Keven uses candle but it's dangerous sometime's because he lives in a wooden house and one day he goes to the city and try to steal stuff that he needed but he remembers something he looked at the woods on the place where his house got to build there's a fire the thing that he remembers is the candle. he tries to go back as fast as he can but he didn't get there in time when he got back he only sees the red stuff destroying his house.

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Girl in a bridge

There's a woman named Samantha, she's is a beautiful woman, she lives alone, many people admire and like her, one day, she was walking to a mall to buy some food for his fridge then a man walks and bumped into her, a man apologizes so Samantha carries on. The next day Samantha decided to go to the park and when Samantha look around he saw a man, and when she looks at him, she knows that she recognizes the man and suddenly she remembers that is the man that she bumped into she said that's weird maybe it's just a coincidence and like 10 minute's ago Samantha wanted to walk on the bridge's and sit for a minute she looks at the surrounding of her saw a man passing by a look at it and it's the guy from the park suddenly something and like talking to her but no one is near her when she taps the guy and looks at it face the guy have no face and suddenly heard a screaming sound of women this women didn't have a face too but she had a mouth she says wake up. the voice, it's getting louder than louder and suddenly so dark there's a light the sound is coming from the light so I tried to follow it suddenly my eye open a big and I saw a man trying to help me because I collapse.

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Two kids

One's upon a time a man name Russel lives in a shack in the wood. he chops wood's and sells it for money but he cares about our planet too so if he cut a big one he would plant 3 to 5 one's, but that's not the mysterious thing on this guy. the mysterious one is he dreams about two girl/kids this dream isn't just a normal dream because he would dream it most of the time a kid running on the wild they were shouting, Help Help somebody Help us and sometime's when that happened and he tries to help them something bad happened to him like getting attack by wolf's or sometimes get trapped by some traped that the other hunter has put for the animal's but one time he didn't get trap and could have helped them but someone was hunting them he can't see the face because the guy that was hunting the two kid has a mask. he tries to save them but he keeps dying but one day he used his mind and said it's my dream! I can do the thing that they can't do he thinks that there's police and the police appeared in front of him, that how he saves a two kid in his dream though.