English work

Hello, today I'm going to share a work that I have done in English,

Show don't tell

What do you think “show don’t tell” means?

How can we re-write these sentences to “show” and not “tell”?

The buildings were tall.

Sarah was really upset.

She was so happy to see him.

The lake was beautiful.

Try this on your own now, and post it to your blog.

The Buildings were tall - City it's where does hight structure can be found these structures are used for a lot of stuff, used for work, selling, book's, hotel and more, beautiful structures that help us a lot.

Sarah was really upset - a girl crying, tear's coming out of her eye's because one other girl is mean to her.

She was happy to see him - A girl hasn't seen a friend of his in year's but yesterday they meet, the girl was full of joy.

The lake was beautiful - There a park this park has water and many people go there to fish swim and just relax.

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BURNING HOUSE

Burning house - One day there's a man named Kevin he's a busy man. he lives alone to the wood he works a lot of jobs he drives school buses, some time's he's a casher and sometime's stole stuff to survive, he stone on store's, he disguises themselves as a customer and get what he needs and run as fast as he can. Keven uses candle but it's dangerous sometime's because he lives in a wooden house and one day he goes to the city and try to steal stuff that he needed but he remembers something he looked at the woods on the place where his house got to build there's a fire the thing that he remembers is the candle. he tries to go back as fast as he can but he didn't get there in time when he got back he only sees the red stuff destroying his house.

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Girl in a bridge

There's a woman named Samantha, she's is a beautiful woman, she lives alone, many people admire and like her, one day, she was walking to a mall to buy some food for his fridge then a man walks and bumped into her, a man apologizes so Samantha carries on. The next day Samantha decided to go to the park and when Samantha look around he saw a man, and when she looks at him, she knows that she recognizes the man and suddenly she remembers that is the man that she bumped into she said that's weird maybe it's just a coincidence and like 10 minute's ago Samantha wanted to walk on the bridge's and sit for a minute she looks at the surrounding of her saw a man passing by a look at it and it's the guy from the park suddenly something and like talking to her but no one is near her when she taps the guy and looks at it face the guy have no face and suddenly heard a screaming sound of women this women didn't have a face too but she had a mouth she says wake up. the voice, it's getting louder than louder and suddenly so dark there's a light the sound is coming from the light so I tried to follow it suddenly my eye open a big and I saw a man trying to help me because I collapse.

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Two kids

One's upon a time a man name Russel lives in a shack in the wood. he chops wood's and sells it for money but he cares about our planet too so if he cut a big one he would plant 3 to 5 one's, but that's not the mysterious thing on this guy. the mysterious one is he dreams about two girl/kids this dream isn't just a normal dream because he would dream it most of the time a kid running on the wild they were shouting, Help Help somebody Help us and sometime's when that happened and he tries to help them something bad happened to him like getting attack by wolf's or sometimes get trapped by some traped that the other hunter has put for the animal's but one time he didn't get trap and could have helped them but someone was hunting them he can't see the face because the guy that was hunting the two kid has a mask. he tries to save them but he keeps dying but one day he used his mind and said it's my dream! I can do the thing that they can't do he thinks that there's police and the police appeared in front of him, that how he saves a two kid in his dream though.

Music of 1960's The beatle's

Hello, today I'll share the music that listened to. we are supposed to listen to a beetle song, I listen to Yesterday for the people who don't know The Beatles is a band from the 1950s to the 1960s I listened to the song yesterday this song is a sad song, it talks about the good past and like how sad he is because he can't have the past I was supposed to listen to the Beatles music and to my favourite one or to some that i have lisened to I like to like chill music or gaming one K.A.A.N - Mary jane it's a chill song I listened to it sometime's when I listened to it when I play games. or when I relax. 

Down here is a link to a map you can see where did they go on the NZ part. Link

 

The Beatles is a band from the 1950s to 1960's they were so popular that day. here are the name's of some of their song's, Yesterday, she loves you, help and more.

Anzac

 Hello guys, today im going to share the Anzac, the stuff that happened there and more. I'll answer some question that would show what happened. 

what is  Anzac? it's an army. 

what does A.n.z.a.c stand for?  Australia New Zealand army core. 

where did they fight? it's in Turkish

who attack first? the Anzac, British, german and french.

why did they attack the Turkish? The British, Anzac, French and German think Their objective was to wrest control of the Dardanelles and re-establish sea communications with Russia through the Black Sea and end the Ottoman Empire's role in the war. I'll put a link here it's a show map I tried to make my own one but it's bad so yea  forgive me for that - Link

hello, today ill share a work that we have done in ESOL. our teacher has read a book to us. and she gave us some question to answer after that we are supposed to tell something about Athletics. on athletics, on the last of athletics, I watched it and it's fun for me because I think my Kahuwi win. 

  THE WISH (Anton Vogt)

Answer the following questions in full sentences. Give a quote from the actual story to support your answers.

IDEAS

1. What was the boy’s wish?  He wishes that the man that made him lie would die

2. Was the boy’s father strict or lenient? How do you know? I'm pretty sure he’s strict but a kind one he’s son doesn't want to lie but I think because of that strict he wanted the guy to die because he made him lie.

3. How did the boy usually spend his summer? Getting some milk and selling it.

4. What was the weekend chore he hated most? Sunday because he would need to clean the church and ready the stuff that they are gonna use.

5. Why was the boy upset with the old man? Because the old man makes him lie, all of the milk got sold but he feels sad because he forgot to sell one to the old man but only the left out is the one that was not new. So he doesn't know if it’s expired or not. The old man came there and bought milk but he asked if this was the new one’s he said yes.

6. What did he think he needed to forgive the old man for? For making him lie 

CONTENT

7. What is a milk round? Not sure 

8. What is a ‘billy’? (see if you can find a picture and insert it.) in modern days, billy is used to store milk.

9. What is the “Day of Rest”? Why did the boy think that using the hall in many ways made a joke of this day?  Not sure on this one

10. What is a “post mortem”? It’s when someone is examining a dead body.

11. What does “rapt attention” mean? Giving complete attention to other people or something.

12. Find dictionary definitions for: pious; flop; compelling; gramophone; desire  

Pious - devoutly religious is like how religious you are, how deep is your religious feeling.

Flop - fall or hang 

Compelling - tending to compel, as to force or push toward a course of action.

Gramophone - I think it’s an old phone that was used to call someone.

Desire - desire is like when you really want something that you would do almost everything to get it.

Social science

 Hello, today I'll share the work that I have been doing on Social Science. I have made a map that has the Slave Trade Triangle, It's the people from West Africa that got captured by the other tribe's the people that they captured will get traded with the goods the other information will be on the map - Map 

10 English works

 Hello, Reader today im going to share the work I have done in 10 English. the work that I need to do is Share what is metaphors and similes.  Similes are describing someone and comparing Example Im like a cheetah He's saying he's fast like a cheetah but on Metaphor is like telling he's that thing Example Im a dog. Similes are used to describe someone and Methatphor is used to tell a thing.

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Sensory language - try not to used saw, heard, smelled, tasted and felt: I waked up to a noisy sound. the sun was so bright I wanted to sleep more but the noise doesn't stop so I try to find where does this sound come from. I tried to find it in the other room but can't find it so I tried to find it on my bed. When I have touched the bed and have notice that's there's a vibration I tried to find where does this vibration come from until I saw my brother's phone It's he's alarmed, after that, I washed my face and go down stair's, downstairs I saw a food that my dad had cooked, I have waked my brother up and tell him to eat. after that we have ready the stuff that we would need for school. as I'm taking a shower I have heard a mysterious sound and I have seen something outside so when I got finish showering, I tried to tell my brother. can't find him up stair so I went downstair but I saw the window open so I tried to find as fast I can but he can't be found a body part's I tried to go up stair and hide but something on the roof so I tried to get a knife but the dark monster is on the kitchen it attack me I don't know what to do I freaked up but I hear something not sure but it's a voice and suddenly I see a glittering sun and my brother trying to wake me up because I was having a bad dream. The end 

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1. Which was your favourite performance? Why?

2. Write two thoughtful opinions about your favourite piece and support these opinions with specific evidence (quotes) from the text (at least 2) in your discussion.

3. Extension: Write your own slam poem

This one is my Favorite's of all - Vid Because it's about the pride of New Zealand

I have liked this because it tells pride of New Zealand, the hard work's of the people's and more it says that this country accepts others it says this nation is good and it says people from New Zealand know the right one and wrong's one.  it says it's worth it to sail the sea for a country like this.

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Language features:

10 ESOL

 Hello, readers, today im going to share what does 321 RIQ mean. 3 Recalls - 3 things I remember about the lesson, 2 Insight  - 2 new things I learned in this lesson, and 1 Question  - 1 question I have about something I didn't understand or still want to know more about. Now I'm going to show my work using 321 RIQ.

The 3 things I remember about the lesson last week is that we did a game this game help us know the name of the other student, adjectives and we practice our memory too we need to remember their names the adjectives that they used Example my name is Matt I'm mad and I like muffins. The 2 things I have learned is their names and some adjectives  

Question: When are we doing writing stuff? 

Task: we need to pick 2 words and tell why we pick that word! 

1. M - I have picked M because it would be easier because I don't know how to describe my name so I'll just describe myself. Im Matt and I were born in American Samoa But when I was a kid I and my family move to the Philippines, I have grown on the Philippines and learn the language name Ilokano it’s my mom and cousin's languages but in 2020 we have to move to New Zealand.

2. A - I have picked it because I liked sport’s I have tried to play Rugby but I'm not fast and good at it I have tried Basketball Im ok at it On Football pretty good It’s not hard sometimes I'm a defender or middle felder I think you already know that the defender does defend but the do defending and attacking, I have tried table tennis im gonna say I'm pretty good at it but on volleyball im pretty bad I have tried a lot of sport’s, that’s why I am active.